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you among the architecture
“these are the bad years,” you tell me,
looking somewhere off into the distance,
into the hydrogen and carbon, the silicone
as if it could be measured, including
names and numbers that bear no meaning,
like the number of times it took you
to learn to be your own company
it was during of these enduring
summer days where all the seasons
merged— spring flaunted all its fall
colors, but winter kept its face—
I remember your crooked teeth, my
shattering into existence
and my mind erupts into a ticking frenzy of seeing
everything material melting into view
names of things and places as I&r
everything’s so real, you said
trailing your hand across the nape of your neck,
watching the fog crawl over,
simulating the shiver.
I spoke the words and begged them,
for once— begged them not to let their selves
destroy you, but rather bring you into view
not the fog but what it brings into appearance
when it is rubbed away— my lonesome emulation
of that world, existing on the path made
in lieu all the damage caused with my missteps.
don’t you see
how we have ruined everything,
by receiving
everything we wanted?
I love you with the star shattering force
of all the countless lives you’ve led
and all thos
perfection is not harbored.
it sits In the corner of your arm, bent,
unnoticed and refrained, becoming you
until you think it that it is empty
reflecting both you and sun so easily
an empty house containing everything
that nothing enters through it
and has begun to write again—
do not be afraid of it
for this is how we are made,
becoming and becoming
until every vision falling is familiar
because you have anticipated yourself to be
in the caress of that same lover
inhibiting these pages.
i am not afraid of death.
i did not want
the boy beneath the apple trees,
or the cherry petals
in the orchard, touched with invisible fingers
leaving brown indentations, bruised
with your inflection even on the brink of spring
not the one littered under the sunlit twigs
grappling for heaven
But the one lying exactly center field
staring straight at the sky--
waiting for a crash of thunder
for the paper flowers, metaphor for holding
over the sills of everything transient,
and left for erasing-- like a soul brimming
over the bridge of an emotion
strong enough to overcome itself.
brave boy with a thousand faces-- i see
this is what revelation feels like:
saltwater, hair clung
to your shoulders in the shower on a wednesday afternoon
and in two hands that had been used for prayer
and writing poetry to prove your
unattachment
what better time and place
to be binded by misunderstanding?
i have become the person that you used to see in me
and you have become reassumed like the sky, resumed
into a thousand voices
calling me home
adam
i have called for you, in the empty chasm hidden in the other two syllables of your name
split straight out of the boundary that has resided in my skin ever since i had
taken the fruit from the tree
and it is in me
that the capacity for blame will become manifested
will fester first and then be born a bastard, singularity- it is here
that i will hold nothing and clutch everything in the pit
of my stomach
and even though you will come to understand
one day, enough to see me laid into the earth as your supper,
grown into the same oak that my lover was, enough
to see me shaped, a whisper telling you good night to remind you
of the spa
winter left you for its love of sadness
but i was left here to break myself open;
my bone marrow rich with fertile soil legs thrumming with life, confined circulation
beneath the skin split.)
You are borne in the atmosphere- riddled like
the tethered stretch of mountain just before rainfall
like a canvas to innumerate springtime
like the river to carry it forth
or a rock to tarry us down
having been reassumed in earth
so as to find eternity perhaps in her:
quiet moment of autumn,
turning ceaselessly before a mirror
but never seeing the entirety
in which your goal is to find solace
but eternity is not a still moment, it
last night, before you slept
you found the world awake, waiting
like a panther, on silent haunches.
you held her, like the last repeating
date of the century, between clenched teeth
(like the little punch of electricity beneath
your skin before the light fails )
to the bathroom mirror where she
left you with sequence:
the loveliness of your consciousness,
sown into the earth.
If you could speak, you’d tell me
of the sound your mind presumes
the light makes,
reflected off the walls of your
cathedral house.
(you hold the edge of bathtub like you would
the string of a guitar, the release of which
is dependent on the absent
fall
At the house, she becomes
too free given your attention, she becomes
the being less than what she is, granted your love; the shell
of a being, reduced to her skeleton; given your eyes,
she is nothing like the ocean but the husk of living,
she is the muse you are allowed to only guess at,
the smallest action enough to break your heart
expressed only roughly, as a sketch of that
which you have meant to say:
'there is life,' your white knuckles
pressed against cold satin, on the brink
between what you intended, the movement
of your hands hooked into the pocket of your shirt,
or the stepping out of a door: framed in hesitation
like seaweed swep
Heaven can be reached. On the quiet nights I ask you why night has to fall for silence,
why we must fall for dissonance in order to achieve harmony, to reach the strength
and composure necessary for allowing me to write you
silly drafts for all the things you've said .
You don't know, you say, (looking for the comet that has taken us years
to pull from the sky) gravity: the pull which shapes you
into a mirror for the same sun which overcomes you,
scalds you for the sake of all you are- it has been
a year and you are still not the same fire that your mother
had intended, and you are not the same fire
that has pulled us from the sky .
i am not afraid of death.
i did not want
the boy beneath the apple trees,
or the cherry petals
in the orchard, touched with invisible fingers
leaving brown indentations, bruised
with your inflection even on the brink of spring
not the one littered under the sunlit twigs
grappling for heaven
But the one lying exactly center field
staring straight at the sky--
waiting for a crash of thunder
for the paper flowers, metaphor for holding
over the sills of everything transient,
and left for erasing-- like a soul brimming
over the bridge of an emotion
strong enough to overcome itself.
brave boy with a thousand faces-- i see
this is what revelation feels like:
saltwater, hair clung
to your shoulders in the shower on a wednesday afternoon
and in two hands that had been used for prayer
and writing poetry to prove your
unattachment
what better time and place
to be binded by misunderstanding?
i have become the person that you used to see in me
and you have become reassumed like the sky, resumed
into a thousand voices
calling me home
adam
i have called for you, in the empty chasm hidden in the other two syllables of your name
split straight out of the boundary that has resided in my skin ever since i had
taken the fruit from the tree
and it is in me
that the capacity for blame will become manifested
will fester first and then be born a bastard, singularity- it is here
that i will hold nothing and clutch everything in the pit
of my stomach
and even though you will come to understand
one day, enough to see me laid into the earth as your supper,
grown into the same oak that my lover was, enough
to see me shaped, a whisper telling you good night to remind you
of the spa
winter left you for its love of sadness
but i was left here to break myself open;
my bone marrow rich with fertile soil legs thrumming with life, confined circulation
beneath the skin split.)
You are borne in the atmosphere- riddled like
the tethered stretch of mountain just before rainfall
like a canvas to innumerate springtime
like the river to carry it forth
or a rock to tarry us down
having been reassumed in earth
so as to find eternity perhaps in her:
quiet moment of autumn,
turning ceaselessly before a mirror
but never seeing the entirety
in which your goal is to find solace
but eternity is not a still moment, it
last night, before you slept
you found the world awake, waiting
like a panther, on silent haunches.
you held her, like the last repeating
date of the century, between clenched teeth
(like the little punch of electricity beneath
your skin before the light fails )
to the bathroom mirror where she
left you with sequence:
the loveliness of your consciousness,
sown into the earth.
If you could speak, you’d tell me
of the sound your mind presumes
the light makes,
reflected off the walls of your
cathedral house.
(you hold the edge of bathtub like you would
the string of a guitar, the release of which
is dependent on the absent
fall
At the house, she becomes
too free given your attention, she becomes
the being less than what she is, granted your love; the shell
of a being, reduced to her skeleton; given your eyes,
she is nothing like the ocean but the husk of living,
she is the muse you are allowed to only guess at,
the smallest action enough to break your heart
expressed only roughly, as a sketch of that
which you have meant to say:
'there is life,' your white knuckles
pressed against cold satin, on the brink
between what you intended, the movement
of your hands hooked into the pocket of your shirt,
or the stepping out of a door: framed in hesitation
like seaweed swep
Do not be afraid to be happy
because your happiness is escalating
for you can be the world in which he lives,
the setting fire that's become his
infinity of choice. You can be the sky or better,
the earth that forms around his molten heart
in knowing that you'll never be the muse
for the poetry he writes, but that you
can be his background. Do not tell me
your secrets, for I will swallow them
like quicksand, a black hole, wary only
for the star it knows it cannot hold.
Do not wish to be his, for I will collapse
your words because its best to never write
about the present, because you can't perceive
the feelings as they come, but only
I am not the sacrificial lamb because I do not lose myself, but you
in the darkness of the lamps which i have extinguished in my memory,
when I tell you the things which will catalyze your changing heart:
that I am like gravity and gravity is like the truth that goes without saying,
like the space of the barren ocean enveloping you, and the wait to remind you
of darkness which is the combination of the all light, and the reason
that you are afraid of being silenced; of having nothing left to understand,
which is the combination of all knowing, to lose mobility and it's parallel to sound
to knowing there is something here that even you canno
I cannot love you more than life itself
Because you are life, the way I see it
Reflected in a train car window.
I can love the tremor in your heart,
That of a man with boyish hands,
Moved by music, or the telling you
That you are where you are meant to be
Because you can be nowhere else-
but I am unsure that you will understand
the sound of words without music,
and that is not life so much as the idea of it,
the thing we use when breaking each other
out of cycles. You and I can be nothing
more than explanations,
Overrun with prophecies
That make us guilty
if they do not come true.
If I press my ear against my arm I hear the metallic hum of white noise;
press it hard enough and it will buzz uninterrupted, the steady red
light of a cigarette that indicates she is watching you. I am here
to feel your eyes on me, the tingle in the center of your palm,
to tell you about the space between my words, of the space between us that becomes
so tempting to infuse with color, the red which runs beneath the bite of winter snow.
you drum the beat into your body because you cannot get enough. you love her
because your heart is not enough, because the stammer of your words will outdo
the finality of your hesitation and even the pe
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I'm drawn to broken extroverts
who wear their brash affectations like silver medals—
with dark prideful eyes and an open yearning for
another chance at the gold,
upset slung heavy around their bruising throats,
willing to change at the slightest suggestion
of another impending failure.
i.
we landed in oklahoma
and drank cheap martinis in the terminal;
you carried my guitar and fell in love
with my voice but not my tongue,
not my hands.
ii.
there's a man with a garage
that looks like a plane because nothing
meant more to him. will you make a model
of that bar? will you make a model
of my red cheeks? or will you live in a townhome
with her and three children?
iii.
the problem was you're not gay.
the problem was there was feeling
but it wasn't for us. i had you but
it wasn't for us.
iv.
i'm not sure if i resent you,
but i remember that bar and every pockmark
on the stool you sat on while i played
the song that parted yo
i pray that someday soon, in a lonesome winter, your bones will cease to ache.
regrets will no longer break your morals like glass figurines,
you will not ask God to pardon your sins.
you will forgive yourself.
i hope, for your sake, that your butterfly-flutter eyes
will only be dampened with tears worthy of shedding.
your glory will shine out of those 2 crystal windows
and you will finally know what freedom feels like.
one day, in the midst of a dreary december, i wish for your wings to open wide
and carry you to heights far past any you have ever experienced.
your lungs will become blooming forests
with snippets of poetry carved into
In the wake of multiple futures we break apart.
You find the point where the sun rises
solamente al cielo and I go to the river
where wind falls into my watery eyes
and cascades over the back of my neck
and here I know how life throbs
caught in flesh, I know the hearts
of lonely people sin alas tenues
serpentine and thrashing.
You had given me a full look, a look with all
the cycles in it, a look that made
Hudsons of my jawlines, por supuesto
we were serendipitous, and
I couldn't keep my hands off you
and sure, it was temporary para siempre
but we will return to classic rock
and Atlantic conversations,
I will return to kis
last night, before you slept
you found the world awake, waiting
like a panther, on silent haunches.
you held her, like the last repeating
date of the century, between clenched teeth
(like the little punch of electricity beneath
your skin before the light fails )
to the bathroom mirror where she
left you with sequence:
the loveliness of your consciousness,
sown into the earth.
If you could speak, you’d tell me
of the sound your mind presumes
the light makes,
reflected off the walls of your
cathedral house.
(you hold the edge of bathtub like you would
the string of a guitar, the release of which
is dependent on the absent
fall
in my recent uploads, there has not been chronology, no logical stream of time-- but I will do my best from now on to upload poems when I am feeling them,
instead of months later. I am extremely backed up with all my writing and everything I attempt to work on turns into a six-page
epic. (sometimes I wish there was someone who could pick apart the pieces.) when that happens, it becomes eventually
impossible to write because you are always thinking about the past things you've written and editing those. and right now
I am always either writing or procrastinating. (but its always easier to talk about writing than to actually do it.)
its 3
I have never been comfortable showing my writing unfinished. This is going to be a bit of a personal post, but I guess that's all it can be really- impersonal writing is boring (so I've heard). The reason why I say this is because I hardly ever feel as if anything I write is finished, and when other people have already seen it I feel like its already made it's impression on somebody and it isn't worth correcting it for the sake of changing what has already been taken away from it. And sure, I know the feeling of reading something and having it beg for correction, for better line breaks, for punctuation but its never really the same because a
so i know i haven't been here in a while, and have neglected commenting (judging by the massive amount of beautiful things in my watchbox) and i'm sorry. but there are reasons, such as the fact that I'm not going to writing school quite yet anymore it seems. bunch of financial issues i'm not about to start feeling sorry for myself for- so I've created a bright side for myself: staying in the city means i get to keep my instrument and go to music school! at least for this year and then i'm going to try very hard to transfer because i don't see how i can stay here much longer... I'm actually starting to feel like i'll miss it when i'm gone.
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